Monday, August 10, 2015

Pets Should not be Allowed in Schools - Term 3 Week 4

WALT persuade other students to agree with our opinion.  This the purpose for my writing.
Success Criteria:
  1. I plan for a writing task
  2. I write a variety of sentence lengths with different sentence starters
  3. Give reasons with detail - use specific words
  4. I write most topic and high frequency words correctly.
  5. I use capital letters, full stops, question marks and exclamation marks correctly.
  6. Use persuasive language



Pets should not be allowed in school.

In my opinion pets should not be allowed In school.

My opinion is that pets should not be allowed in school.  These are the main reasons why we should not allow pets in school.

Another point is the pets can run away from the school and when they are on the road they can get hit by a car and could get badly hurt.

The pets can also cause mischief by distracting the children from their learning and they can do their business in the classroom and people can slip on the lino if a dog or cat did it’s business there.

Some children can also be allergic to furry creatures and they can get really sick and itchy, they can start to sneeze and cough.  Another point is that they can also steal your bag and book packet  and they can eat all of the food

This evidence comes to show that no school should allow pets on their grounds.

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